Film Review: Changes Made

 Today I finished making the changes that had been addressed earlier in my film review. In the film review, I was tasked with sending my film to my friends dad where he was to review it and give me unbiased feedback based on what he thought about the film and how it could be better.  The main points he had made in his review is the need to fix many of the editing aspects in the film including making it simpler and removing unnecessary special effects. He also put an emphasis on music and the fact that it should only be used in scenes that actually need it rather than being forced. We fixed these points of emphasis by going back and seeing how the film could be improved using these points as a guideline. Going back and reviewing the film again, we had also seen what he had been seeing with the special effects and decided to get rid of them completely as they did not add to the film as intended. To address the music issue, we had cut down music to scenes that needed them most, limiting overlap with music in between scenes and keeping it plain in simple. A final minor issue that had been brought up in the film review had to do with lighting. Although very minor and mostly insignificant, we also slightly brightened the whole film to make it clearer. I believe doing this film review benefited our project as it gave critique by an unbiased source where improvements could be made and made our project better in turn. Hopefully these changes are what make our project go from good to great.